Writing Process Mini Series – The Revising Step

Revising is a crucial part of the writing process, but it can often be challenging for our young writers. Most students believe that once their story is written, they are finished. Teaching revising skills to elementary students helps them understand that good writing requires refining their ideas and improving their work. In this post, we’ll explore effective strategies for helping students embrace the revising process and strengthen their writing.

Why Revising Matters

Revising allows students to reflect on their writing and make changes to improve clarity, structure, and creativity. It teaches important skills like:


  • Recognizing areas that need improvement
  • Rearranging ideas for better flow
  • Adding details to make the story more engaging for the reader
  • Removing unnecessary information

When students learn to revise, they develop a growth mindset, seeing writing as a process that involves improvement rather than perfection.


How to Teach Revising Skills to Elementary Students

Provide Positive Feedback

A little praise always goes a long way. Our students are just beginning to learn how to write so it's important to encourage them. Find parts of their writing or storytelling to praise during the revising step. We want our students to feel empowered and excited to write. 


Holding writing conferences or daily share time can help build confidence in our young writers. Focus on one aspect of revision when you are first teaching the revision process rather than all the steps in order to not have students become overwhelmed.


Use A Revising Checklist

I love using checklists with my students! Reflect on what (and how many) steps you want students to take during the revision process. For my second graders, I have four major areas I want them to think about when reviewing their work for possible revisions. They are:


  • Adding more details
  • Removing unnecessary words
  • Changing words to sound better
  • Moving words around

Encourage “Adding and Changing”

Many students struggle with the difference between revising and editing. All students automatically try to fix mistakes such as spelling and punctuation when told it is time to revise. It often doesn't make sense to them that we are working to have a better sounding story before we fix common mistakes.


A big part of teaching revising skills to elementary students involves showing how to add details or change part of their writing to make it better. To help teach this we can ask questions such as:

 

  • Can you describe this character more?
  • What happens next in the story?
  • How can you make this part more exciting?

Focusing on adding and changing shifts their mindset from “fixing mistakes” to “making their story better" and helps them understand the difference between revising and editing.


Model the Revising Process

One of the best ways to teach writing is to make sure we are modeling what we want to see our students do. Demonstrate revising by sharing your own writing or a class story. Show how you identify areas for improvement and make changes. Thinking aloud during this process helps students understand that revising is a normal and valuable part of writing.


Pair Students for Peer Feedback

Peer feedback can be a powerful revising tool. Pair students to read each other’s work and offer suggestions. Encourage them to use positive language and ask questions like, “What did you like?” and “What part was confusing?” This collaborative approach helps students see their writing from a reader’s perspective.


Best of all, students love working with their writing partners and reading each others' stories!


Building Revising Confidence

Teaching revising skills to elementary students takes time, practice, and lots of repetition. By providing clear instruction through modeling and kid-friendly checklists, your students can be successful at revising their writing.


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  • Episode 45 - Editing and Revising Teaching Methods

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